Katakana words: ホオー：wind blowing through the trees カサ：rustling sound in leaves ジャー：sound of rushing water グット：used to denote concentration フンカフンカ：sniffing noises ワカワカ：denotes excitement シュー：shows quick movement ワンワン：Dog's name (onomatopoeia of a dog barking)
Many of these katakana words were used to show sound effects or used as loan words.
ケリーさん！あなたのまんがはすごいですね！Choice of animal names がすきですよ。It's very clever and creative! I like how you use Katakana for all the onomatopoeia. Drawing がじょうずですね！The only thing I would change or add, is to have maybe one or two more ways of incorporating Katakana so that you can use it for another purpose, too. Good luck!
Katakana words:
ReplyDeleteホオー：wind blowing through the trees
カサ：rustling sound in leaves
ジャー：sound of rushing water
グット：used to denote concentration
フンカフンカ：sniffing noises
ワカワカ：denotes excitement
シュー：shows quick movement
ワンワン：Dog's name (onomatopoeia of a dog barking)
Many of these katakana words were used to show sound effects or used as loan words.
すごいですね！ えはとてもいいですよ。I like how you followed the format of how Japanese works are read top to bottom and right to left.
ReplyDeleteケリーさん！あなたのまんがはすごいですね！Choice of animal names がすきですよ。It's very clever and creative! I like how you use Katakana for all the onomatopoeia. Drawing がじょうずですね！The only thing I would change or add, is to have maybe one or two more ways of incorporating Katakana so that you can use it for another purpose, too. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteケリーさんのまんがはとてもかわいいです！ ねこはきれいですね。The dog.. has an interesting choice of name XDD
ReplyDeleteとてもおもしろいです。そしていぬとねこはとてもかわいいですね。I really liked it! I liked that fact that you have used many Katakana in your manga. This was a very cute story.
ReplyDeleteとても かわいいですね！ The drawings were very good and expressive! I thought that you made very good use of Katakana in the onomatopoeia.
ReplyDeleteとても たのしいですよ。だいすきですよ。えが じょうずです。
ReplyDeleteあなたのえはとてもいいですよ！ haha you are probably a manga fan!
ReplyDeleteえ が とても じょず です！ すごい！ かわい です。そして はなし が おもしろかった。
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